I was looking for locations for Claire, revolving around parks. Come to think of it, Paul's story, which I am rewriting at the same time, has a number of park scenes as well.
There are three scenes in the story to do with parks.
15. Out of focus, at a distance, the coloured lights of people and life. A pub or restaurant at night.So this requires a park close-by a roadway with shops and a bar or pub or restaurant. I was going to say that I couldn't find a location like this on Sunday but actually I never even looked for such a place. It will have to wait until after Christmas.
Claire on a park bench. Nearby, Nick. He listens, betraying nothing. He is neutral, or defensive.
18. A bed of flowers. Brilliant sunshine. Kew Gardens. A rush of leaves above, a set of trees around a pond.So this scenes requires one location, by the water, and abundant flowers and trees nearby.
Claire on her back, eyes closed, taking this in. A weekend of sun is a rarity in London. A great aid to the fabrication.
She looks to her right. Nick is there, a blank expression on his face.
I did not have to go far to find something suitable.
Or something more idyllic?
The next scene requires something slightly different.
19. Nick in the distance. By the Thames. He turns and smiles at Claire. She forces a smile in return
You can see Claire on a slights rise, looking down towards Nick.
He is close to the water we saw at the edge of the frame in the previous scene.
So it would not be difficult to create the impression of the best London weekend.
Now a very different scene.
27 She runs across the street and goes into the park.
Once past the trees there is a slight rise and paths go out in three different directions. From this vantage point one can see quite a distance. She looks for him, to confirm he was there, but she can see no one, on any of the paths.
Now imagined something different for this scene. I suppose I thought the park might be more manicured. More paved pathways than these mud paths, but I really don't know why, or if it was important.
Well, this is only the beginning. I need to go back and find that other location. And there a few other things too. More after Christmas.
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